SILENCE–HAIKU TRIPTYCH

A HAIKU CHAIN by Susan L. Daniels and Noel A. Ihebuzor

 

it echoes–
this pause before words
weighted breath

It speaks loud
the empty spaces
between words

those moments
minds falter before
sharing truth

*** A haiku conversation between my duet duet partner and I. Came about after I commented on the main poem she wrote. Susan’s Haiku is in normal font, mine is italicized.  

 

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12 Responses to “SILENCE–HAIKU TRIPTYCH”


  1. 1 Noel Ihebuzor November 10, 2012 at 8:40 am

    truth haltered
    for so long, now free
    freeing tears!

  2. 5 Noel Ihebuzor November 10, 2012 at 3:16 pm

    hidden fears
    uncertainties now
    flowing away

    tumbling down
    tongue now unleashed to
    wonder why

  3. 7 Noel Ihebuzor November 10, 2012 at 3:28 pm

    OVER TO YOU, DUET PARTNER and energizer!

    • 8 Susan L Daniels November 10, 2012 at 4:30 pm

      Oh, you are a true inspiration, Noel! Like a shot of vitamin B-12 for energy. Going to start calling you vitamin N 😉

      • 9 Susan L Daniels November 10, 2012 at 4:48 pm

        S:
        it echoes–
        this pause before words
        weighted breath

        N:
        It speaks loud
        the empty spaces
        between words

        S:
        those moments
        minds falter before
        sharing truth

        N:
        truth haltered
        for so long, now free
        freeing tears!

        S:
        and floating
        on that salt river
        soft releasing

        N:
        hidden fears
        uncertainties now
        flowing away

        tumbling down
        tongue now unleashed to
        wonder why

        Wow, we did good!

  4. 10 Noel Ihebuzor November 10, 2012 at 4:54 pm

    Great Septotych?
    A haiku septotych! was fun co-creating this.
    Kindly upload to your blog!


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