By Noel Ihebuzor
Haiku on True
True speaks not false nor
fake, voice genuine to self and
you, clear, clean and real
Opposite of false,
true stands upright, shiny bright
while false falls in slime
the false , with time, drinks
shame; the true with time flowers
petals blooming proud
5 thoughts on “Haiku on “True””
Noel–gorgeous, gorgeous set of haiku, love the close–the false, with time, drinks/shame; the true with time flowers/petals blooming proud.
Wow, wow, wow. Your haiku always have such heart, heat, and spirit in them–which makes then so very true!
asante sana, dada!
Imela–you are most welcome! I took a trip over to your exegesis, as well, if you want some thoughts to make you fall asleep 🙂
My writing and thoughts re. faith are dense and heavily branched, and will probably work better than an Ambien to send you to sleep!
You were very deep and clear there. I learnt a lot from your comments. The social voice is there as well the voice of Baptist lass!
thanks so much, Noel…