By Noel Ihebuzor – three haikus
First always resides
in the past but conditions
present and future
First sings best where souls
script rich lines in shared colors,
that merge past and now
First hands etch deep marks
on soft canvas of fresh souls
marks that free or freeze
9 thoughts on “Haiku Prompt – “First””
Noel–these are lovely, just lovely. You do so well with this form!
Thanks, Susan! Special thanks for introducing me and teaching me this art form>
It has been my pleasure to do so–you breathe so much life into them!
Never read your haiku before, just found you on haiku heights, well….I’ve missed much…..your beautiful words affected me…
You write good stuff up here, so please keep penning and keep inspiring! 🙂
I would like to thank you for following my blog. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you and that your visits in my blog have been and will always be a joyful ride.
Thank you again and I wish you a lovely day! 🙂
Same to you Subhan. We share and learn.
each worthy, together even more so. beautiful N…first rate. 😉
“on soft canvas of fresh souls
marks that free or freeze”,.loved these lines,.