By Noel Ihebuzor
Slow to grow and glow
wisdom’s seed once blooming soon
the soul with peace fills
its bright rays flow deep
reflections expanding thought
making it richer
richer minds then reach
rainbow outputs, clean thoughts, peace
world and soul happier
Lovely!
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really nice knowing that you who tutor me on haikus liked this! Thanks, Susan.
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And here, the student surpasses the teacher, by far 🙂
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always so kind to me, is Susan!
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🙂 thank you–but this has nothing to do with kindness–your haiku have life and a palpable soul to them. Beautifully done!
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this is soooo LOVELY.. indeed brimming with truth and beauty 🙂
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you are so kind! Many thanks, happy you liked it!
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with real wisdom should come peace…..well-done
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soulful haiku, every word is intelligently and beautifully used, “rainbow outputs, clean thoughts,” :0
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Jaideep, thanks for this and other kind comments!
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Beautiful words ! And so much wisdom in the lines ! Very well done 🙂
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Thank you, Sweta!
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This set has a brilliant storyline that comes with a lesson for everyone…. I am glad that Susan nurtured the haiku poet in you…. thats how we all grow isn’t it?
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I like “rainbow outputs” – that’s such a lovely image. Enjoyed these!
Richard
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The outputs of wisdom are that beautiful, Richard!
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I am proud to say that I am really getting addicted to your intelligent and beautiful use simple but deep mind probing words. ” richer minds then reach
, rainbow outputs….” ! Mamawoye Noel!
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Patricia, soon you will have me blushing! Thanks!
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