Keyboard sudden sodden with stammer,
sodden fingers leaking, pressure and pleasure on fingers,
hydaulics, control valves and bubbling words and thoughts,
energy, all tumbling, fluid dynamics and sublimal flows stabilising
internal riots, ordered entropy
a benign judas like affliction announcing good standing
so when next the keyboard stammers,
say no buts, not butts, not misskates, not errors
but errands from within butting into and jotting out
to the without, shy
******A poem by Susan, a wonderful poet and my duet partner, on slips and errors when we engage others through the medium of the keyboard prompted this poem, a poem that is more of an incoherent stammer than a statement or a theory of slips – As we all know, Freud has the last word on that topic! Susan, this song is for you!
6 thoughts on “When the keyboard stammers – a poem on slips and errors”
Noel–this is great–smiling! Especially like the judas portion.
Hmmmmm! Me too!
LOL, the misskates is brilliant! More raving about this in the comment section on my blog 🙂
or would that be are–methinks misskates must be plural 🙂
and Miss Kate skates along, never slipping, never erring, just taking, staking and never mistaken!
🙂 love the alliteration!