Achilles unchained

By

Noel A. Ihebuzor

 

Achilles rode headlong into

headlong battle,

riding in a cranky chariot of straw and smoke

vision dim and dimming,

still he charged into the fray,

in loosening losing circles

against imagined enemies

 

And in the ever widening void of his mind

he battled them all,

he disgraced them all,

he speared them all

with his blunt sword

soaked in the iron oxide

that dripped from him,

he spared none

He staked all,

the impostors, the stateless,  stake-less stakeholders,

pretenders, false claimants, heritage grabbers,

ingrates and gate crashers,

the uncultured, the crude,

their women, his “claimed wenches”

 

Their battered remains,

he drags in rags round his city walls

a conjecture and structure,

spawns of a fertile but fetid imagination,

where truth is tried, tied down, tortured

and twisted tall tales are told and sold

 

The blue sheen of the filling up moon,

Blending with a seething red and

a sickening dull green,

swirling and swelling within him

fill his mind, dulling and lulling his thoughts

 

The battle words he froths now,

the battle incantations he speaks

are all whisperings from what he hears

the moon speak to his dangling mind

the enemies he sees outside are from within him

sad but gleeful denizens of the forest and bush

he carries in his darkening soul, demons –

a thousand and one of them

who prey on, void in and void his mind

and put his own heel in his mouth

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9 Responses to “Achilles unchained”


  1. 1 Abigail August 15, 2013 at 5:52 am

    This sir, is beautiful. Even more so as you speak in such metapohric terms of how our heel can take up residence elsewhere, but mostly our mouth. Well done sir, well written.

  2. 3 feathersproject August 15, 2013 at 12:20 pm

    Reblogged this on FEATHERS PROJECT.

  3. 4 Kemi O August 15, 2013 at 3:58 pm

    This is powerful! How the mighty have fallen!

  4. 6 Keyz August 17, 2013 at 11:00 am

    His enemies truly hail from within… filling in with praise yet luring him to his bitter truth…


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