Song of a Child Bride – a duet

By Susan L. Daniels and Noel A. Ihebuzor

I am a girl.
Eleven years ago
I came too early for you,
but I was yours
as nothing else was,
and I grew under love
brighter than the sun.
I am still growing.  I am green
& unripe fruit, unready

I am a girl,
I long to play, feel
and unfurl.  I run after butterflies
I wave after birds in flight
I dwell in innocence
I harvest smiles and stars in all I see

I am a child
my eyes carry hope.
I feel.  I dream past this body
and carry in these bones
a life that hums promise
and walks joy

I am a girl,
body, soul and spirit,
and human
not a piece of flesh
not an object for peace
not an object to be priced

I am a girl,
though lately this body bleeds
and these breasts can make milk
I am too young for this business of women
my hips are too narrow to balance a child,
too slender to push one out;
my mind too new to mother another
and I will break beneath a man’s need
my young body if forced to yield will only hurt,
weep in pain and shame

I am a child,
I long for safe spaces
to draw and discover my dreams,
to live them, and to sing, joyful
as I discover the marvels of the world,
my world expanding

I am a child.
I dream of books I have not read
and the only seed I am fit to hold now
are those of the mind, scattered to work deep;
not the body choked with seeds of a man
I must accept but carry in fear and bitterness.
Death will bloom inside my body, not life
if I am planted now

I am child,
not a wife
marriage at my age will drown me
twist my bones
pierce my body
and break my spirit

Mother, father
I am your child.
Your flesh made and fed me;
to send me to a husband
is to send me to a slaughterhouse
where the floor is stained
with the blood of so many cattle
listen to my words, words
eyes speak but mouth cannot;
words my body shouts in trembling
your eyes can hear if they open.
I beg you to answer past my fear
and shield me with your arms

Father and mother
ignore the clutter of culture
spare your daughter this chain of torture
Ignore the clatter of the appeal of gain,
remember our  bond of blood
before you cause me pain,
before your decisions tear and shatter my developing body
and eventually spill this innocent blood

 

Intro to this duet by Susan  on her blog – >

**You guys had to know this was coming, right?  Noel (regular text) and I (italicized) have created this duet, using the voice of a child.  Though it was, as always, a pleasure to weave lines with Noel, the subject is not one that leads to much joy…no matter how talented your duet partner is.

****Let me only add to this intro that Susan’s talent is infectious, and that it has been my luck to be so infected by it! 🙂 

http://susandanielseden.wordpress.com/2012/10/06/duet-for-the-girl-child/#comment-12719

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7 Responses to “Song of a Child Bride – a duet”


  1. 1 Susan L Daniels October 7, 2012 at 4:10 am

    See–I knew you would come up with a better title–I am snagging it so we match 🙂

    Again, an honor to twine words with you!

  2. 2 Trent Lewin October 7, 2012 at 4:20 am

    Hard to hit “Like” on this one, that sounds trite. This is fairly heartbreaking. Must say that you both act as quite a duet.

  3. 3 Bruce Ruston October 7, 2012 at 4:56 am

    I agree with Trent on this one should never break a child

  4. 4 unfetteredbs October 7, 2012 at 10:31 am

    I agree with trent.. i only hit like because you guys are wonderful.. you hit my soul with this one. Nicely done.. deep heart wrenching and oh so well written

  5. 5 Jax October 9, 2012 at 10:29 am

    Nicely written through the eyes of a child. A painful subject that should not be silenced, cos we need to out an end to child marriage.

  6. 6 Noel Ihebuzor October 9, 2012 at 10:36 am

    Thanks, Jax. Yes, we must all continue to lend our voices to this fight against what is a major rights violation.

  7. 7 Anne October 24, 2012 at 10:11 am

    Exremely powerful and moving.


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